[FanFic] Burning Stars - Volume I-VI

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Re: [FanFic] Burning Stars - Volume I-V

Post by Drako Slyith » Tue Mar 01, 2011 4:39 am

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Thanks alot for your help and your excitement! You're words of encouragement are speeding along my story (and thus wasting much productive time during the day! xD )
:lol: Anything to help :lol:

Anyway, I got that you meant that they are humans too. I know the point for marriage is a weak one, I just threw it in. But yes, I agree that they probably would have essentially genetically engineered clone-children.
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Re: [FanFic] Burning Stars - Volume I-VI

Post by ThePrivateer » Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:39 am

Okay! Volume 6 is up! Once more, hope you enjoy it! :D

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Re: [FanFic] Burning Stars - Volume I-VI

Post by Drako Slyith » Thu Mar 03, 2011 5:03 am

Excellent story advances! Just gotta say though, A. the ares probably wouldn't know what the name of the CSC attacking them would be. Other than that no problems, but in a future volume you might want to have Saben explain why he turned on the ares and helped Jovius. Great job :D
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Re: [FanFic] Burning Stars - Volume I-VI

Post by ThePrivateer » Thu Mar 03, 2011 5:08 am

Drako Slyith wrote:Excellent story advances! Just gotta say though, A. the ares probably wouldn't know what the name of the CSC attacking them would be. Other than that no problems, but in a future volume you might want to have Saben explain why he turned on the ares and helped Jovius. Great job :D
Ahh, thanks! I just edited a few things in that were a bit odd -- I fixed the reference to the Dawnstar (Saben now says it's name) and also changed it so rather than Lieutenant Omrad protecting Jovius, Saben is the one that stops Chad killing him.

Thanks again for reading! :mrgreen:

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