FAN-FIC- Huari- Betrayal

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FAN-FIC- Huari- Betrayal

Post by MikeAngora » Thu May 19, 2011 8:10 am

Flying non-stop for many days took its toll on me. The constant fighting , selling buying and other activites made life such a stink that i thought many times about going back home to Erdani but no, Domina wouldn't have it, i had to go to the core she said. Ahead i could see the large jet black huari fortress. I look a quick look in the cargobay to check the health of the Huari slaves i had rescued from the Sung slave transports a few days ago.

"Great bringer of goodwill, Have you rescued our brothers and sisters?" squaked the radio.
"Yes great priest, they are with me and safe" i replied almost sarcastically and then mumbled to myself "Safe as a cow in a slaughterhouse!"

"Great bringer of peace, you may dock at the bay of sixes and sevens" he said again.
"Great taker of peace, speak clearly, i cant read Huari! dumb freak!" i replied angrily.
"okay okay we get the point! you're tired, bay 67, beer vending machine on the left"
I docked and immediately Huari guards unloaded the slave coffins and workers refuelled my battle worn wolfen.

The priest was most impressed and yaked on and on about some magic temple about to be attacked by Sung and about how i could get a cool Sung QAC if i killed a dragon.
"Great Priest, if your Huari fort has internet, you ought to check out the transcendence forums. Most of the Warriors there have given bad reviews about the QAC. Therefore i wont have my Azz kicked by the sung over a stupid weapon that takes longzu spheres to recharge!" I replied to the priest.
He looked shocked and angred to the core.
"You dare speak to the high priest like this?! I'll kill you!" screamed a guard but was motioned to silence by the now calm priest.
"Okay dont fight the sung and save the temple, someone will take your place. Now leave in peace." he said even as a shocked assembly looked on and i walked out.

I got into my Wolfen and sped out when suddenly five hudge destroyers opened fire on me.
"freak'n hell! he said i could go in peace! Double-crossing Huari Scum!" I yelled.
I pulled up my joy stick to avoid fire as best as i can and then...."Shatter!" the destroyers immediately turned to dust.
Next i armed my KM900's and MarkV Howtizer and fired blindly at the forstress while avoiding their own artillery. I could almost see and hear frantic attempts by the women and children to escape in pods but my omi-Tev9 made the salughter even more enjoyable. I asked domina to defend me and finally fired the last Km900 to witness the great explosion.
I docked at the ruins of the fort and stormed in with a laser-minigun and killing any and every survior. Some women pleaded for life but I quickly tore through their bodies with my laser-sabre. I finally reached the temple hall and noticed the injured high priest. He looked up at me in horror.... I pulled his collar and pulled out his throat insides with my bare hands. I casually walked back to my ship again killing blindly any and everything i could. I picked up the beer vendors and placed them in my cargo bay along with some Superconducting coils. Two very beautiful Huari women fell to my feet with two young children pleading for life. At this i felt a little emotion and led them into my cargobay and tied them up. Then i took both of their children ( a 5 year old boy and a 10 year old girl) and slit their throats infront of their horrified mothers. I got in the cockpit, pulled a lever and headed of towards a BM brothel.

Moral of the story? Never EVER piss off a Wolfen pilot high on Booster and nori!!!
"Umm, I'm sorry I just killed your officer Akira, but he was getting on my nerves''
"Can I take his ship now?"

Calvin E. Taylor to Akira Gorbachev, the daughter of Ares Chief Admiral Vasily Gorbachev, after brutally killing one of her Tundra pilots.

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Re: FAN-FIC- Huari- Betrayal

Post by YuriRuler90 » Thu May 19, 2011 11:01 am

Uh, wow. Interesting read, to say the least.

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Post by Chase » Thu May 19, 2011 11:41 am

Er...yea... Hectic. Sounds worse than a day as a trauma surgon after an aeroplane crash... And i should know.
Just for future reference. Post your stories in the trans. Fan fic area. But...er... Well done? PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!!! (runs away and sobs.)
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Post by stealthx » Thu May 19, 2011 12:53 pm

First off,
MikeAngora wrote:\"Great Priest, if your Huari fort has internet, you ought to check out the transcendence forums. Most of the Warriors there have given bad reviews about the QAC. Therefore i wont have my Azz kicked by the sung over a stupid weapon that takes longzu spheres to recharge!" I replied to the priest.
:lol:
Moral of the story? Never EVER piss off a Wolfen pilot high on Booster and nori!!!
But your story somehow give me the impression the Wolfen pilots high on Booster and nori are just pieces of $#!+ prone to delusions of grandeur. :x
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Re: FAN-FIC- Huari- Betrayal

Post by MikeAngora » Thu May 19, 2011 3:10 pm

Chase wrote:Er...yea... Hectic. Sounds worse than a day as a trauma surgon after an aeroplane crash... And i should know.
Just for future reference. Post your stories in the trans. Fan fic area. But...er... Well done? PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!!! (runs away and sobs.)

Where is the fan-fic area? been looking for it for a long time. No i wont kill you -- reason?


Cause in reality in just an Antares freighter pilot having nice dreams of owning a Wolfen- Which I will one day if these damn Korolov poops increase my salary a little! oops! who left this intercom on? Ah! me and my big mouth! there goes another raise!
"Umm, I'm sorry I just killed your officer Akira, but he was getting on my nerves''
"Can I take his ship now?"

Calvin E. Taylor to Akira Gorbachev, the daughter of Ares Chief Admiral Vasily Gorbachev, after brutally killing one of her Tundra pilots.

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Re: FAN-FIC- Huari- Betrayal

Post by Chase » Thu May 19, 2011 3:18 pm

Go to the bottom of the forum page. Its just above the off topic one.
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Post by Wolfy » Thu May 19, 2011 11:31 pm

Moved to the fanfic board.
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Re: FAN-FIC- Huari- Betrayal

Post by erik dela cruz » Fri Jun 03, 2011 9:06 pm

I thought this is another well cooked up serious and boring story. Mike Angora you're one crazy SOB! I love this man! Next time I'll try them boosters. Hahaha! :mrgreen:
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.....talk without speaking......
.....scream without raising your voice......

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Post by Resident-Pyromaniac » Sat Jun 25, 2011 6:29 pm

Hm. very interesting uh.. story you got there. :shock:
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Re: FAN-FIC- Huari- Betrayal

Post by erik dela cruz » Fri Jul 01, 2011 11:36 pm

Resident-Pyromaniac wrote:Hm. very interesting uh.. story you got there. :shock:
..and I thought you were crazy..Hehehe. He obviously beat you hands down on this Pyroman. hehehe. :lol:
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.....talk without speaking......
.....scream without raising your voice......

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