The story that literally blew me!

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The story that literally blew me!

Post by TheLoneWolf » Fri Oct 30, 2015 5:12 pm

I read this fanfic 3-4yrs ago. http://z8.invisionfree.com/Transcendenc ... topic=1730

I VOTE THIS ONE OF THE MOST UBER AND AWESOME TRANSCENDENCE (Fanfic or game lore) STORY EVER WRITTEN OR TOLD!

I ALSO SAY THAT WE FIND THIS GUY, STICK A MEDAL TO HIS CHEST AND HI-FIVE. Then be gone ahaha.

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Re: The story that literally blew me!

Post by FourFire » Sat Oct 31, 2015 4:46 pm

Hardly.

There are many great stories out there, involving spacecraft and civilization in space.
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Re: The story that literally blew me!

Post by TheLoneWolf » Sun Nov 01, 2015 4:11 pm

Damn this story has a great potential to become a fun expansion. And as for intergalactic stories with civilizations and heroes, i know many. Homeworld. UFO. Mass Effect. Galaxy on Fire. Alien. Dead Space. Lost Planet. And many more. I dont expect such stories be told as fanfics, actually. By standards i believe you are right!

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Re: The story that literally blew me!

Post by TheLoneWolf » Sun Nov 01, 2015 4:18 pm

Yup Last Angel is 100x better than this story. But Last Angel is not a transcendence story. But still i love Star Wars the most ahahahahaha!

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Re: The story that literally blew me!

Post by MikeAngora » Thu Jan 21, 2016 9:52 am

I went and read it today.

My critique:

The writing style makes it really really difficult to imagine what's going on. The author often takes the liberty of going off topic in large swathes of text and then comes back to the topic.
As was mentioned by many of the other people in the forum, there were lots of inconsistencies with the game (like the damage capabilities of the juggernaut's armor) and many times I found myself in a non-transcendence universe with some passing references to transcendence. Frankly, I've read better fan fictions here.

Those points aside, it was still good fun to read. Will I say fantastic? No, not really, but I will say that it certainly is worth a read once.

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