Crisis of Commonwealth Military

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Crisis of Commonwealth Military

Post by DigaRW » Sun Mar 13, 2016 9:30 am

Prologue
After a brave and kind Pilgrim reach Galactic Core, many-many thing in Human Space is changed. Commonwealth is growing stronger, but also their enemy is attacking more hard as a revenge from the past. Warlords, Pirates, Slavers, Outlaw, etc. Although Commonwealth Military is doing best as they could, but many heroes and civilians is fallen into enemy or death. This War is never End.
But, there something lie in Eridani system. Not Something, but Someone, a young boy. He will take his fate to become a defender of Commonwealth, to stop the war and make a peace in Human Space. Will he succeed? Or his destiny is just give nothing?
We never know...
Charon System, The New Beyond
“Sir, we lost 73 freighter in some system when they escorted. They said that pirate now using tactics that sending large horde of corsair and viking to freighter, even to EI100.” Said Director’s assistant.
“Damn that pirate, they are now taking their chance to revenge.” Said Archilkov, Director of the Korolov in Charon.
“Change the rule of escorted ship, they must escorted by at least two gunship. We can’t allow this pirate aggresion collapsing Korolov Corporation.” Command Director Archilkov.
Jiang’s Star System, Ungoverned Teritories
“Aw sh**, sh**, sh**! I shouldn’t get too close to Slaver Citadel, and... oh sh**! Earth Slaver firing at me.” Cursed a man that piloting a Ronin/C. Particle beam is still fired from his ship to counterattacking an Earth Slaver, but it not match against powerful Nandao bolt cannon.
He see an image display that showing “Hull Breach Imminent!’, he then run to his escape pod. After getting in, he eject himself and his gunship is explode. The Earth Slaver seem targeting him, they thrust their ship to his escape pod. But suddenly they got attacked by a massive number of slam cannon projectile. The man seeing something flying from top, a massive purple capital ship. He know that ship is Hurin. The Hurin keep shooting at Earth Slaver and make them retreating. After they disappear from scanner, the Hurin then flying to escape pod and attempt to communicate to him.
“Don’t worry, we come here to save you from dark forces.”
St. Katharine System
“I watching the execution of captain Helios, the commander of CSC Antartica. He and all crew is executed due his betrayal to Commonwealth Fleet. They was presentating that Ares Orthodoxy will make a peace engagement with Commonwealth, but most of Commonwealth Government is disagree with him. Because we are still fighting against Ares.”
“Helios was visit me one day before he is executed, and give me a 3DV that recording when he meet a Phobos and their Commander, Arkhinso. He also said that Arkhinso also convicing leader of Ares to make a peace with Commonwealth, but finnaly he was executed one day ago.”
“I will keep this secret and may find someone who can make both Commonwealth and Ares live in peace.”
...
Note: The Human Space is have many star system, but to avoid a confussion I will take some interesting star sytem. And chosen star system is:
-Eridani System
-5 Indi System
-Ras Alhague System
-Cygni System
-Rigel Aurelius System
-Jotunheim System
-L372 System
-Charon System
-St. Katherine’s Star System
-Mu Casser System
-Humboldt System
-Kinder’s Star System
-Sanctuary System
-Arrakis System
-Exael System
-Jiang’s Star System
-Tzadkiel System
-Kunlun System
-Eta Ceti System
-Tianlong System
-Point Juno System
I make this story from Eridani to Point Juno.
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Re: Transcendence: Military Crisis

Post by MikeAngora » Sun Mar 13, 2016 9:59 am

An excellent attempt Dig! I'm looking forward to reading this.

Only a word of friendly advice from a fellow pilot. Do run your writing through a grammar check. Grammar can make all the difference. :D
www.paperrater.com is the one I often advise my Phd students to use before submitting their thesis.

Otherwise? Well done!!
Cheers!!!
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Re: Transcendence: Military Crisis

Post by DigaRW » Sun Mar 13, 2016 10:12 am

MikeAngora wrote: Only a word of friendly advice from a fellow pilot. Do run your writing through a grammar check. Grammar can make all the difference. :D
http://www.paperrater.com is the one I often advise my Phd students to use before submitting their thesis.
I using own language in MS word, so this should a be hard to check their grammar.

However, thanks to reading my story.
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Re: Transcendence: Military Crisis

Post by TheLoneWolf » Mon Mar 14, 2016 10:52 am

DigaRW wrote:
MikeAngora wrote: Only a word of friendly advice from a fellow pilot. Do run your writing through a grammar check. Grammar can make all the difference. :D
http://www.paperrater.com is the one I often advise my Phd students to use before submitting their thesis.
I using own language in MS word, so this should a be hard to check their grammar.

However, thanks to reading my story.
Hmmm! Nice heading you got there! The story will make sense once more chapters add on! And do use that! Mike, you got a nice site there haha!

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Re: Transcendence: Military Crisis

Post by DigaRW » Mon Mar 14, 2016 11:09 am

Oh yes, I forgot to say, I will update it once every week due I have no connection from my PC. So I just can update it when have a chance to go to NetCafe (or it meaning I must rent a computer to connect an internet) to update it.
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Re: Transcendence: Military Crisis

Post by MikeAngora » Mon Mar 14, 2016 11:56 am

Looking forward to it DIG! Cant wait for the next chapter.
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Re: Crisis of Commonwealth Military

Post by DigaRW » Sat Mar 19, 2016 8:53 am

Introduction

Eridani System, The New Beyond
In one of Commonwealth Residential
“Sleep time is over!”
“Sleep time is over!”
That sound is always annoying him every “Morning”.
“Hey, I’m already wake up!”
He pressed the alarm button and get up on the bed. He then press a button, suddenly the window is open and Eridani star shining his room. He saw a beautiful scenery of outer space, he then saw some Ronin and EI fly pass his room.
“Dareth, come here. You must have a breakfast.”
“Okay, mom. I will be there soon, I need go to bath.”
“Don’t too long, sweetheart!”
“Ok.”
He walk to his bathroom, put off his clothes, take his towel, and turn on the shower. He then set the shower into a warm water, and... (I think you know what he is doing).
...
After refreshing, he then choose his uniform. After that outfit match for him, he then looking his jacket.
“Wait... where is it?” he said in his heart
“Mom, where my jacket?”
“Did you forget that jacket is hanging near door?”
“Oh, thank you, mom.”
He is quickly take his jacket and wear it. Then he take his TabCom (Portable Computer made from Unique glass, just like Android in the past, but much stylish and very handy) into his pocket and rushly walk to dining room.
When he is just arrive, he smell Centauri Rices aroma and Chicken soup.
“Wow, what a wonderful food?”
“Why? You never eat this thing?” she said.
“Ok-ok, I’ll take a breakfast.”
While he is enjoying my meal, he ask to my mom.
“Mom, will dad go home today?”
“Yes, he will go home in 6 PM.” She answered
“Which system?”
“He now in Ras Alhague system.”
“Well then, it’s good to hear that.”
...
After that, he grab his jacket and say goodbye to mom. Then he pressed the button and door open, he walk out his room, I mean... his house... Unit 332F.
He then walk in the big corridor, there is many people in here. Some people only walk passed him, some discuss their bussiness. He don’t have an idea what will happen, but he feel uneasy in there. Until a tall woman shout and point toward outside station,
“Look, Centauri are approaching!”
he taking a look at transparent glass. Six cyan, small, and rusty gunship approaching Commonwealth Residential.
Centauri Warlords!
Dareth is don’t care about that, he keep walking in big corridor. He knew that Centauri raider isn’t match against Ronin and Centurion.
But...
A heavy Centauri is approaching, he is shooting Commonwealth station. Making the station shaking, He lost his balance and fall into the floor.
“Ahh...”
“Damn, what the hell is that?!”
He then trying to get up, some people is panicked, but they do nothing. They only hope some ship will save them. Until a Wolfen gunship fly toward heavy raider and launching a missile to that gunship.
Boom...
Too bad for Centauri, their ship is too weak against Blast damage.
...
After that event, he continue to going to Commonwealth University. Everyone seems forget about what happened and continue their bussines.
Arriving to his class, he then walk to his own desk and sit on there. He was thinking it was dangerous if Heavy Centauri gunship is attacking this station, they using unique weapon made by themselves like Claw cannon (Made by using DK10 Arbalest Cannon combined together). They pressed Commonwealth about few year after a Pilgrim reach Galactic Core (but there is no news about him anymore), Centauri attacking Commonwealth very hard as a revenge from Arco Vaughn’s death.
“Hey, what’s up bro?”
He was startled by other young man who also his classmate. His name is Alvarez.
“Fine, thanks.”
“I heard news that Centauri attacking this station. I don’t know what happen there, because I’m still in my house until this station shacking.” He said
“Yeah, Centauri Heavy is showing and shooting this station.”
“What? Damn that warlords. If I have my own ship, I’ll blast their station like that Pilgrim and...”
“Haha, okay. What is your favorite ship?” he asked before Alvarez even finish his word.
“Wolfen, of course. And you?” He answered with convinced face.
“Whatever ship that I will have. My dad will buy me a starship.”
“Oh yeah? You’re in luck, my mom say she will buy me a starship two weeks later.”
Suddenly, their teacher walk in to their class. He inform that some student is absent due her health isn’t well enough to attend the class, he then starting his lecture.
...
“Hei Dareth! Want to go Tivania’s house?” Ask Alvarez when they about leave class.
“Yeah, for sure. But I’ll go to Greenmart first, to buy some fruit for her.”
“Okay, see you later.”
...
“365C... 365C... 365C... There is!”
Finally, he reach his destination. He knock the door (This is must to do when you visit other people, even although you can simply pressing button and door is open) and wait a little, until door is open and... Alvarez? How did he come this place so fast?
“Alvarez? How did you...”
“Hehe... I’m just wanted to see her if she is okay.”
“Forget it, where is Tivania?”
“Don’t worry, she just right on bed.”
He walk to inside unit 365C and put down his bag, they both come to her bedroom and see her lying on the bed with her roommate.
“Hey Tivania, are you okay?”
“Just a fever, but otherwise I’m okay.” She said.
“How did it happen?” He asking to Natasha, Tivania’s roommate.
“I don’t know, but I think she is not well sleep.”
“I’m fine! I’m just need little rest.” Said Tivania.
“Okay, I hope you get well soon. And here some gift for you.” He said, and then he gave her a bag filled by fruit.
“Thank you, Dareth. Oh yes, when Mr. Harison will return home?” She asked.
“My father? He will return at 6 pm.”
“Okay, I need to go home right now.” Alvarez said,
“Me too, let’s go Alvarez.”
Dareth and Alvarez then walk to leave unit 365C.
...
When Dareth walk in corridor, he was remember how he meet Tivania.
One day, Dareth and his father was docking into some container habitat in this system. When they donating their food cargo, suddenly her father asking to bring Tivania with us to become our servant because he wanted Tivania study at local Commonwealth University (Mostly, Commonwealth station is have one). His father agree, Why? Actually her face somehow similiar with his young sister. Which is she dead long time ago, when Mr. Harison take Dareth and her sister to watch battle arena in Rigel Aurelius system.
When they about going home and still in Cygni, suddenly a Charon Frigate shooting at them. Mr. Harison accelerate his ship as fast as possible to avoid them, but then a missile hit their starboard. His sister wasn’t wear safety belt, and... her head hit the wall. Her left arm was broken, and her head was beleeding. Dareth, as a her brother, pull up his safety belt and run to his sister to save her. But some crew hold him up and take him into safety chair again. Mr. Harison urge his crew to take her into Rejuv tank, but it’s come little late because that Frigate’s missile always hit them out. Until then they see Hull Breach Imminent in ship display. With their hope almost lost, suddenly a Saphire come to help them and take down that frigate so fast. Finnaly they safe at last, but bad news is her sister exhale her final breath.
Mr. Harison isn’t actually take Tivania to become his servant, he then buy an house unit and give it to Tivania. She was suprised but very grateful to Mr. Harison. She now live with her best friend, Natalia, which also was coming from other Container Habitat.
And then Dareth almost colliding with a black-race man, fortunately the man hold him before it happen.
“Hey, watch your step kid!”
“Oh, sorry sir.”
Then he walk pass him.
“Hey, come on.” Alvarez said.
“Alright-alright.”
He then run to catch up with him.
...
Afterward, they finnaly arrive to Alvarez unit. His unit is three blok from Dareth’s unit.
“Okay, see you around Darreth.”
“You too, Alvarez.”
He then take a look at transparent glass, he see something in dock area below his level. EI500.
“Damn, I forgot!”
He open the door, and see a man above 45 years old is sit on the chair.
“Dad?”
“Hey Dareth, I’m back.” He said, then hug Dareth tightly.
“Dad, I can’t... breath...”
Mr. Harison then release him.
“Sorry my son, but I have surprise to you.”
He then walking to outside unit and pointing at some ship.
“Your own ship, Osaka.”
“Wow, thank you dad.”
He looked at that ship, a rare starship. Most people say it’s matched with Sapphire.
“Okay, do you want test?” He asked.
“Yes, of course!”
They both going to docking level and ride that ship, Dareth was so happy because he was given a good starship. It’s may look like a transporting ship, it got a good weapon. But Jonathan Harison know how to modify it into a good fighter, it was installed with a deadly Turbolaser, with class II deflector, Tritium Propulsion upgrade, and all segment is Tevlar-Composite.
...
Day after day, Dareth now know how to fly like a bird. He now are practicing a dogfight with his father, in some space near Raisu Station. Dareth is keep shooting at his father with Turbolaser, but Mr.Harison is easily avoid them at much. Why EI500 can avoid them, actually that EI500 is equip a Titan Fusion drive. Not only it, it has a Omni Particle cannon, Yoroi S100, and even he has Light Blast armor. The reason he got advanced equipment because he was served as transporting ship for Commonwealth Militia.
“Come on Dareth, you should not only shoot at the ship, but you should shoot the area where the enemy ship will end up.” He said.
Dareth keep shooting at him, he even not notice his father shield is almost down.
“Hey-hey-hey, wait Dareth...”
It’s too late, his shield is down and Dareth accidentially damaging his armor.
“Ah, no.”
“Oh, I’m sorry dad.” Dareth Said.
“It’s alright, it just need a few repair. We can just... wait, who is that?”
A green blip appear in LRS, and it move toward them swiftly. And then, a communication display appear in Dareth and his father display ship.
“Hey, Dareth. See my new Wolfen?” A familiar face talked to them.
“Alvarez!”
“Haha... May I join you?” He asked.
“Yeah, for sure. So Dareth, you should play with him. I will wait here to make sure you both aren’t distrubed by Warlords attack” Say Mr. Harison. He then take a bath for refreshing while Dareth and Alvarez dogfighting at each other to increasing their fighting skill.
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Re: Crisis of Commonwealth Military

Post by TheLoneWolf » Sat Mar 19, 2016 11:53 am

Nice going Dig! Although there are grammatical errors here and there, but still great story!

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Post by DigaRW » Sat Mar 19, 2016 12:28 pm

Damn, I forgot to check it.
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Re: Crisis of Commonwealth Military

Post by MikeAngora » Sun Mar 20, 2016 9:07 am

Very nice story you got brewing here!
"Umm, I'm sorry I just killed your officer Akira, but he was getting on my nerves''
"Can I take his ship now?"

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Re: Crisis of Commonwealth Military

Post by DigaRW » Sun Apr 03, 2016 9:29 am

Revenge of Warlord Clan!
Raisu station, Eridani System, The New Beyond
Red blip in radar approaching, it not only one or two, but ELEVEN! Nine Centauri raider and two heavy raider. Unfortunately, there is no any ship near Raisu station right now. Rick Jones, new station master of Raisu, push the alarm to alert all resident in that station and quickly transmit a distress signal for any Commonwealth ship or station nearby to help them.
Alvarez, Dareth, and his father is the first receive that signal.
“Hey, what happened to Raisu?” Ask Alvarez.
“I don’t know, maybe...”
“They are under attack!” Cried Harison
He then fly to Raisu Station.
“Come on, they may not have any ship that guarding them.” He yelling at Alvarez and Dareth.
They both follow Mr. Harison and arrive to Raisu station in 15 minutes.
...
“Over here! Help us!” Cried Rick in radio transmitter.
“Dareth, Alvarez, kill that light raiders! I will finish that heavy raiders.” Order Jonathan Harrison.
“Alright, I gonna finish them out.” Say Alvarez, he then began shooting at some light raider.
The Centauri heavy raiders is focus to shooting Raisu station, while light raiders guard them. Alvarez then launch the Longbow Missile into a light raider and boom!
“One down, eight to go.” He said, he then continue to take down another raider with his dual Turbolaser.
Dareth also fighting with other raider, with his Turbolaser, he can shoot directly to raider’s ship and make them explode easily.
...
The battle resulting all of Centauri raider is killed, while the trio ship is still alive, even they take no serious damage.
“Thank you all, we wouldn’t survive with your help.” Say Rick in Radio
“Don’t mention that, I’ll gladly help.” Say Mr. Harison
Dareth then see a group of green blip in his LRS.
“Look, the reinforcement is coming!”
A group of Ronin is flying to their position,
“Alpha Hawk squadron coming in, report your status Mr. Jones.”
“Area clear captain, we just saved by three ship nearby.” Say Mr.Jones.
“Understood, we will stay in area to make sure the second wave will not coming. Meanwhile, our transporter will come here and launch sentinel that will guard you.” Say the leader of group, Chris Washington. He then change the frequency to Jonathan.
“Thanks to your help, sir.” He then order his team to guard Raisu station.
Jonathan replied with his smile, and then order Alvarez and Dareth to go home
“Come on, we should go home.”
...
One month later,
“Come back soon, darling.” Say his wife, Annie Harison.
“Don’t worry my honey, I’ll come back.”
He then looking at his son, Dareth.
“Come on.”
Jonathan and his son then take their own ship and starting to undock, while his wife looking at him in the side of window, waving her hand to give him a farewell.
...
Jonathan’s ship is thrusting in outer space, going to the stargate. He will continue working as transporter of Commonwealth militia, which he must leave his family for a long time.
He then contact to his son in Osaka ship via communication display.
“Dareth, I will going to other space for a long time, I’ll meet many dangerous bad guy that can kill me. Please, take care to your mother while I’m gone.” Say Jonathan like he know there are chance that he will go home with just a name.
Dareth quiet for a moment, he then say to his father loudly.
“Don’t say that father! You should promise that you will come back safe and we then together again. I’m lost my sister a long ago, then I won’t lost you.”
Jonathan then bowing his head, but then he hold his head up high and smile at his son.
They arrive at Stargates, it’s time to warp to other system.
“Goodbye Dareth.” Say Jonathan, he then go through a massive stargate into 5 Indi system.
“Goodbye Father.”
...
Dareth then come back to his station, he was almost finish his study but his father it’s too early to gone. He promise to follow his father through the space.
Unfortunately, he doesn’t notice that three red blips is chasing him. Until one of them shooting his Heavy Claw cannon to his ship.
“Oh my god, what was that?!”
He then stabilizing his ship and look at SRS,
“Damn it, three heavy raiders?”
He know his ship is strong against heavy raiders, but it’s a three Centauri raiders. He shouldn’t underestimate this warlord clan.
“Alright, it’s far enough.”
He then maneuvering his ship and began shooting at that raider. Unfortunately, this day this traffic is very light. So there is no commonwealth ship nearby to help him. His Turbolaser is kept shooting at that warlords. One of them is down after his ship received too much laser, and now two left.
He keep shooting at them, but his shield isn’t match against Claw cannon. And now front armor is quickly damaged.
Fortunately there a Centurion flying nearby.
“Thanks god. hey, help me out!” He cried.
“Alright kid, hold on.”
His ship alarmed and showing Hull Breach, he then turn his ship and thrust foward to escaping battle as the Centurion replace his position. That Centurion just shoot few Katana Star cannon and both two centauri warlord blast into pieces.
“Are you alright kid?” He asked.
“I’m just need replace my armor, but anyway thanks for your help sir.” Say Dareth.
“You’re welcome.” He then continue toward to Stargate.
...
Finnaly, he arrive in his station. His mother is awaiting him at dock, and welcoming Dareth.
Dareth then ask his mother the some credits to replace his armor, and she agree. She transfer some credits to his son, and order Dareth to replace his armor on armor dealer because it’s more cheap than dry dock.
...
Armor dealer is near from his station, he then dock on it. He walk in a great hall in that station, he was impressed by architecture of that station. Until a man with black suit greet him.
“Welcome young man, I saw your ship docking here. And looks like you have purpose to come this ship.”
“Yes, my shi...”
“I know your problem, your front armor need replacing right? Okay, I have a some armor that will deal that problem. So tell me, what type of armor that you are using?” He asked
“Tevlar-composite.”
“Alright. But if you are interest, I can install a Hardened Plasteel armor on your ship.”
Dareth thinking at moment, but then he denied it.
“No, I don’t have much credits.”
“Ok, I will order my men to replace your armor.”
...
Dareth is sitting in a chair near dock service and eating some snack, watching some robotic arm detach front armor from his ship. And then they replace it by new armor, it was taking 1 hour to replace his ship.
Then the man that talking with Dareth before, approaching him with the smile in his face.
“The ship has repaired, now your credits.”
“How much?”
“900 credits.”
“Alright.”
He then transfer his account some credits to that dealer.
“Thanks for your service sir.”
“You’re welcome.”
He then head back to his home.
...
In outer orbit, Eridani system.
“Attention everyone! Today we will engrave our history as warlord...”
All soldier quickly form a line.
“...We may defeated in the past by that damned pilgrim, but now we are ready...”
A tall man with Centauri insignia stand on front of them
“...We may weak, but they shouldn’t underestimate us like an insect...”
“...Today, as the boss order, we will attack Commonwealth colony in st.John planet to show our intent...”
“...If you not ready to die, you can go back to your home...”
None of them going back, they still standing at their position.
“Alright, I see your noble soul. And now go to your ship!”
The soldiers quickly take a ride their ship, preparing for their battle. Though they will be mostly killed rather than back alive, they still have their pretension to revenge for their clan.
...
“Raider at my back, need backup!” Dareth cried over radio, when he try defending Commonwealth colony during Centauri invasion two weeks later.
“Alright kid, I’m on it.” Say some Ronin, he then shoot at a light raider that hit Dareth’s ship in the back.
“Alvarez, where are you now?!”
“I’m near container habitat, engaging enemies!” He replied
“Hey kid! Protect Habitat Alpha 152! They need help!” Say Chris.
“Alright sir.”
Dareth then fly to Habitat Alpha 152. He wasn’t too ready for this invansion, Centauri attacking Commonwealth with around one hundred light raiders and twenty five heavy raider. Which a great centauri invasion in history. They attacking in group, one focus to Starton Eridani, while other small group attacking small station.
“Thunder-bird coming in, what your status... emm.... Habitat Alpha 152.” He say to the Station master, he say the station name because Dareth doesn’t know his name.
“Thank you, please clear the area.”
“Alright then, hold on.”
Dareth then shoot at Centauri raider, all of them is light raider. So he can take them down so easily.
“Thank you sir, we couldn’t survive without your help.”
“Nah, I’m not old enough to called sir.”
“Uh oh... I’m sorry.”
“That’s alright.” Say Dareth, he then fly to outer Habitat Container to see if that Centauri raider attacking them too.
After arriving, they found nothing than a lone container habitat. But he see two light raider approaching him.
“Okay, take my shining light!” Say Dareth, he pull the trigger and shooting at them.
Both two are down. Suddenly, Dareth receive a radio communication from Chris.
“Alright kid, we have clear the area from them. You and other young pilots go to your home!” Say Chris.
“Alright captain.”
Dareth then fly into his station, there also some ship that piloted by young man docking to their station. While older pilots patroling to guard the Starton Eridani.
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Re: Crisis of Commonwealth Military

Post by TheLoneWolf » Sun Apr 03, 2016 10:54 am

Dareth the great knight xD

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Re: Crisis of Commonwealth Military

Post by DigaRW » Sun Apr 03, 2016 12:17 pm

TheLoneWolf wrote:Dareth the great knight xD
Thanks for your oppinion.
I'm sorry for the late update, the Real Life is very cruel. But fortunately I made it.
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Re: Crisis of Commonwealth Military

Post by DigaRW » Sun Apr 03, 2016 1:00 pm

I was wondering if a mod included in this story.
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Re: Crisis of Commonwealth Military

Post by TheLoneWolf » Sun Apr 03, 2016 4:34 pm

DigaRW wrote:I was wondering if a mod included in this story.
I'm making a mod that includes content (as much as I can code) from The Motivation series. Why don't you?

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